Not a big fan of the implication you've been talking to people who have opinions about me.
[Thanks for waiting so long for a new page, guys! I've had a lot of crazy stuff going on lately and just haven't been able to update. Thanks for sticking around!]
i love the way you're handling simplifying characters in shots like the 4th panel, and also showing some of the physical "weight" of your characters with very limited shading - i'm very much excited about the story but it's fun to get to pick out so many little artistic details in each panel, too.
final note - the physical tension alan's been holding for their entire meeting so far is almost tangible, and it's interesting it see it contrasted with the almost aloof way jack carries himself (the vibe is less "aloof" and more "i accept that things are going to happen to me that i don't like and also that i'm going to have to deal with them and it'll such but whatever i guess")!
Wow, thank you for such a thought-out comment!! Those are actually things I think about a lot while drawing pages and it really means so much to me that you noticed and decided to comment on them! Especially the characters' body language, I'm very glad I could get that across. Once again, thank you!
[Thanks for waiting so long for a new page, guys! I've had a lot of crazy stuff going on lately and just haven't been able to update. Thanks for sticking around!]